Critical materials

Peter Barry, 'Stylistics and the Logic of Intution: Or, How Not to Pick a Chrysanthemum', Critical Quarterly 27.4 (December 1985), 51-58.
Keith Cushman, D. H. Lawrence at Work: The Emergence of the Prussian Officer Stories (University Press of Virginia, 1978), 47-76.
Ford Madox Ford, from Portraits from Life (Boston, 1937), pp. 70-2. (Reprinted in Edward Nehls, ed., D. H. Lawrence: A Composite Biography (University of Wisconsin Press, 1957), pp. 107-109.)
Walter Nash, On a Passage from Lawrence's 'Odour of Chrysanthemums', from Language and Literature: An Introductory Reader in Stylistics, ed., Ron Carter (George Allen and Unwin, 1982), pp. 100-120.